Love Hurts

surrounded by a battalion of adversaries, most of whom he thought were his kins.. he was the lone warrior.. although looking at him one could think so.. but it was not a fight for surivival.. his desparation was more out of his ambition to emerge as a winner.,


for she had promised him that she'd be his prize if he won this.. she, on whom he had his eyes set even as he was fighting.. she, who stood there on the hill and watched him fight.. she, to whom he looked for support, for strength.. for inspiration..and she kept it all away from him.. the only inspiration he gathered was an illusion of his heart.. his heart, where he thought she still lived..but what was he to to know was that she'd already chosen to walk out of it..nd she'd already covered miles.. away from him..from where he was fighting, all he could see was her.. then he saw her walk away..and a sword pierced through his heart.. smoothly sliding its way through..he fell on his knees.. his eyes still fixed to where she stood.. his head bowed down.. his eyes closed.. and the years passed by his eyes.. all the times they'd spent together.. the walks, the talks.. the thoughts.. everything..


A tear fell on the blood soaked earth.. it was tired.. it'd been waiting too long to travel this mile.. and this journey to the warmth of the earth was all that was needed to wash the pains away..he couldnt die.. thats what she'd wished for..he stood up and continued his battle.. with a bleeding heart..he won his battle.. but lost his heart.. perhaps lost his life..ud say whats her side of the story..??she'd wanted him to understand.. understand everything that she did..and he had understood.. he'd understood everything she'd done..but nature taught him one BIG lesson..


whom u love the most, hurt you the best..!!

15 Comments:

  1. Amity Me said...
    made me cry, so hard....at the moment i am losing a very precious person in my life...:) wish i could die so an not to feel the pain, wish i could die now, i wish...

    for every word you penned, i am into it.
    MissJody said...
    This is a very touching post.
    I'm lost.
    You lost someone recently?
    DayDreamer said...
    @Amity Me: I would pray for you and would advise you to be strong and ask u to think about those who are with u..
    The world is really beautiful place..n am sure once through with this phase you would come out a more stronger person..

    @MissJody: Thanks for such a sweet appreciation..guess we all go through this phase in life..and am no exception..but the silver lining is that its ova n am happy its ova..
    Amity Me said...
    Thank you very much Dev...

    and thanks for your prayers...

    see u again in my place please?
    gLoBe TrOtTeR said...
    WTF is goin on here?
    Pesto Sauce said...
    The last line could not have been truer. Infact words hit harder than any weapon, they are real WMD (Weapons of Mental Destruction)
    freelancer said...
    Dang! yu write good mate!
    am going to look forward for more
    DayDreamer said...
    @Pesto Sauce: U have got a really beautiful blog..Thankx 4 stopping by and leaving ur commentz

    @Freelancer: Thankx a lot mate for those motivational words..
    ARUNA said...
    Hi Dev, that's a wonderful touching post. I just loved reading it!!!!!
    DayDreamer said...
    @ARUNA: Thanks a lot for your lovely comments..
    Smileyfreak said...
    Great post with an even better message! :)
    anupama said...
    Dear Dev,
    Thanks a lot for your visit at my space n for the sincere comment.:)
    Yes,love hurts many times;but that is not the end of one's life.Time n tide waits for none.we must tell ourselves-''I am going to handle it''.Of course,some situations are terrible.let us live one day at a time.
    As every one knows,we have miles to go before we sleep,just keep the faith.everything will be o.k.
    we are blessed to forget n get busy.be grateful.:)
    you have a good style of writing.keep it up.
    wishing you a cool n peaceful night n reminding you life is still beautiful,
    sasneham,
    anu
    rush_me said...
    Very beautifully written..! You know I find that people who are the (lets say) victims of this whole unrequitted love are much more better writers..!
    they tend to bring out the words in a much better fashion.

    And there is a post in my blog called "addicted to love". You should read that.

    http://butterflythoughts7.blogspot.com/2009/04/dead-letters.html
    DayDreamer said...
    @Anupama: Thanks for your lovely comments..really inspirational..

    @Rush_me: For some reason I missed out on checking out your post..Expect me soon...
    Thanks for your lovely comments..
    King said...
    Love makes a person sensitive, so it always hurt

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